Cold bluing can turn out fairly well if you take your time, get and keep the part clean.
First you have to deburr and polish the part, then it needs to be cleaned.
I use a mildly caustic solution. Wear your ppe...caustics aren't something to fool with. Okay?
Rinse the caustic away with hot water.
Repeat 3-4 times.
Rinse the part in HOT water, until the part is heated through.
Apply the cold blue solution HEAVILY, rubbing it into the surface.
Let sit until the bluing just starts to dry.
Rinse with the HOT water again. If you need to darken the piece some more, then re-apply the bluing solution.
If the part is dark enough for your tastes, quickly dry the water with compressed air and a rag.
Dip the entire part in automatic transmission fluid (Dexron 2).
Set the oil soaked part aside for a couple days. This gives the bluing a chance to "set".
Wipe off the atf, and give it a wipe with proper gun oil, and you're done.
This is a breech that I made and blued with the method described.
If you run into problems with a "blotchy" appearance, the likely culprit was grease/oil still on the surface. This is why you should keep the gloves on, and wash/rinse the parts several times.
Good luck.

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